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1ACCWC#516 - TREADMILL (9) (13)

Total Clues: 24 Total Voters: 29

# Name Clue Points Voters Anno Comments
1 Satyen Nabar Am thrilled to avoid hard exercise routine (9) 3017(AM THRILLED - H)*; to avoid= deletion ind, hard= H (abbrev), exercise= anag ind, def= routine. - Not convinced by the imperative grind after the fodder
- nice
2 Adman_i Lad with trim belly occasionally running on exercise machine (9) 2818(LAD + TRIM + bElLy)*, Occasionally - alternate letters, Running - anagrind, Exercise machine - Definition - Wordplay on definition?
3 Mona Sogal Dreamt about unfortunate drudgery (9) 2719Dreamt*/ about is anagrind/ unfortunate is ill/ drudgery is definition
4 Textrous Met a Dr. about unhealthy routine (9) 2414def: routine, METADR* (anagrind: about), unhealthy: ILL - Dr is typically used before a name, I thought
5 manish jhaveri Gym equipment made running inside fun, not hard (9) 2314MADE* (anagrind is running) inside T [- H] RILL (fun not hard). Def = Gym equipment
6 Kalyan Bandyopadhyay Finally, mom all tired out from drudgery (9) 1911mo(MALLTIRED)*. Def.: Drudgery - WP from Def does not work
- Wordplay "from" answer is not okay IMO
- Wordplay from definition?
- WP from def doesn''t work.
7 @qpheevr “You’ll go nowhere fast with this contraption covered in rust,” read Millicent (9) 1713Hidden, indic. by “covered in”: ruST READ MILLicent. Def.: “You’ll go nowhere fast with this contraption”
8 @usharameshnj Workout equipment can’t read millimeters! Not entirely! (9) 179def: Workout equipment ; can’(t read mill)imeters! ; Telescope ind: Not entirely!
9 Sowmya Ramkumar Routine look at mobile during work (9) 148T(READ M)ILL, Def: Routine, READ - Look at, M - Mobile, TILL - Work
10 Heidi Schroeder Routine drill team manoeuvres (9) 139Anagram of “drill team.” Definition is “routine.”
11 Monotonous team drill, abandoned (9) 129Ans: treadmill, Def : monotonous, team drill *, Anagrind :abandoned - I think "monotonous" as definition creates a ''part of speech'' problem
- POS mismatch in the def.
12 Daily grind initially to study English philosopher 105Definition: "daily grind"; charade of T (initially "To") + READ ("study") + MILL (John Stuart Mill, "English philosopher")
13 Drill team using running equipment (9) 105Def - running equipment, using - anagrind, drill+team= treadmill - Using doesn’t seem to work after the fodder
- Not sure about “⟨fodder⟩ using ⟨definition⟩”; the other way round seems like better cryptic grammar
- "Using" as anagrind seems to apply to the subsequent words. Perhaps "used" might work better.
- using doesn''t work as an anagrind. where is the sense of movement or being wrong?
14 Sweat pants made in Turkey badly (9) 86*MADE in(side) TR (IVR) + ILL (adverb) = sweat (drudgery, as per Chambers). - Def doesn’t work for me
- Pants + intransitive verb - should follow anagram fodder
- The “sweat = drudgery = treadmill” connection seems a bit tenuous for a definition
15 Exercise drill with team training option (9) 74Anagram: exercise (as imperative verb) DRILL with TEAM; Def: training option
16 Routine tweet about dam built on top of embankment (9) 65TRILL (Tweet) around E+DAM*. Def: Routinr - DAM* isn’t exactly “on” E (in a down entry, ADM would be 𝘂𝗻𝗱𝗲𝗿 E; “beside” would work for an across)
17 Endless work running machine 64Double definition - 'Endless work' & 'running machine'
18 Dull dream about being engrossed in work (9) 63Def: Dull (Collins). Dream* in Till (work)
19 Isn't it always so moving when someone feels they need to lose weight? [ 9 ] 53Cryptic definition (referring to the continuously moving exercise treadmill) - Nice but doesn’t quite work. Maybe “It’s moving when people run”
- The inclusion of “so” works with the surface reading, where “moving” is an adj., but undermines the cryptic definition
- I think the clue would work better without "so"
20 Mild alert about salt mine (9) 32Def: salt mine; about = anagram indicator. (Mild Alert)* is anagram fodder - Should be salt mines?
21 Servant finally works, locking study with exercise machine (9) 32T ( servant finally), WORKS= MILL around READ (STUDY) - Works would be Mills, not Mill
22 Dream till midnight carelessly missing good work(9) 12Definition: Work. Anno: (DREAM+TILL+G-G)*. Midnight - G (part of fodder). Good - G. Missing - Deletion indicator. Carelessly - Anagrind - I don''t understand the reasoning of inserting a letter only to take it out again?
- Adding a G (“mid-niGht”) just to take it out again (“missing Good”)? Really?
23 Overwrought, finally sick, had dream about gadget (9) 11T(READM*)ILL. Definition: Gadget - “Gadget” makes for a rather vague def
24 Walk in on it? 0CD